Thursday, April 13, 2006

Ivory Intellect Comments

Rating: 5.0

For pleasure, relief, struggle, challenge, and comfort.
I come to you, with velvet skin, flawless, simple yet markedly intricate.

Few will truly understand your complexity or appreciate you simplicity.
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Jack Dylan
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Sydney Daniels 13 April 2006

I wonder more and more at your talent with each addition here. Fabulous, complex yet simple, nearly elegant sophistication. Bravo!

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***** ********* 13 April 2006

That is just the way I like to dance Jack. A very musical dance through the mind of a man and woman in love.imo But it could be about spring! lol Lovely work. 10 from another romantic dancer, Tai

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Julia Klimenova 13 April 2006

A very elegant poem. You have managed to combine complexity and simplicity in an exquisite way.

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