Friday, October 3, 2008

Its Unfortunate... Comments

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What you waiting for when the world already started going
No one stands for long for anybody to move on
Everything is disappearing and soon will be gone
Neither you and I would exist
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silent soul
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Silent. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ency Bearis 03 October 2008

I can see your sentiment..a write of truism..well narrated and written.. a great piece..... Ency Bearis

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2008

You speak many truths here silent soul and your conclusion is very important, because when it comes to bringing about change, we have to have faith and not care what others sink to, but keep on holding your head above the mirky waters of humanity....humility is a great tribute to being a good human being imo. Lovely message to establish a change. Smiling at you, Tai

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