Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Its Time To Put My Pen Down Comments

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There is no reason for how I feel right now,
There is no who, what, were, when, or how.
I just think it's time, time to take my leave
Time to put down my pen, in this I believe.
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Rik Bertrand
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Valerie Dohren 27 May 2012

Yes, I ofte feel this way too. Sometimes it all seems rather futile, especially when my muse goes on strike and inspiration seems to dry up. Maybe we just sometimes need a rest - it isn't obligatory to write every day, or even every week etc. But I think you will agree that, after a break, we usually do return with pen afresh.

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C S 17 May 2012

Please don't put the pen down Rik, I love your poetry, I know many people think poetry is pointless but its just that it's an art they don't understand. The pen needs us, we need the pen......you know that. Brilliant poem though: -)

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Heather Wilson 15 May 2012

I get your message Oh, so well and know how you feel, I have felt the same, often, but you have a wonderful flow and idea in your poems, NO, NO, it is not time to put your pen down, I have so enjoyed reading your work and will be back to read more, it has been such a pleasure.

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Rik Bertrand

Rik Bertrand

Portland, Oregon
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