It’s the way he curves his lips
To me
That makes their brows to knit
It’s the way he bids me come
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Nice write i enjoyed it and the message you were getting across
Hi Chris... This is a very powerfully descriptive write that put a picture in your mind of the story of a special man. One who worked his way in your and many others lives forever... you get an awesome presence in this poem that invigorates you as you read it. Very well written and expressed Chris! Top poem from you! Dale :)
wow Christopher, this is a very beautiful poem. The words are so true and right.this is a 10! ahh just so beautiful.
Loved the way you portrayed the Character of Jesus! Simply beautiful. God Bless.; D
You nailed his life completely. That is a very detailed summary of what He did to serve us. Keep writing dude!
this is a good poem and you are on the right track with Jesus. Continue to write and we will continue to read. You will see that improvement comes with experience. Good work.Keep it up. Lynn
A nice story about 'The Way Jesus Is' It's clear you have a breadth of knowledge of Jesus' discourses. good job
Sometimes a terrible price has to be paid for integrity. Thanks for sharing. john