Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Its The Smile! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Along the ocean.
On the boat.
On an empty road.
In the fog.
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Kirti Sharma
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Akhtar Jawad 14 June 2014

A smile solves many problems before the problems are created. A nice poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 June 2014

a short poem sweet and beautiful.

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Mark Heathcote 11 June 2014

I like it a lot, but I’m not sure of the use of - in - in your word choice, would not; flowering on my way! Be grammatically better just a thought?

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Saurav Singh 11 June 2014

so true, a smile sails us through. Short and crisp, tough beautifully eloquent. keep smilin: -) .

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