Friday, September 2, 2016
Its Six A.M. Comments
Rating: ★5.0
It's six A.M., near break of day.
Warm beneath my blankets I stay.
I hear the traffic blocks away,
Whining on their ribbon of grey.
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Pamela Sinicrope
02 September 2016
Well expressed. Your use of repetition caught me and I slowed down to re-read. I like.
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7/25/2025 4:36:55 PM # 1.0.0
Like Pam, I was impressed with the reversal used. It fits the sense of the poem perfectly. And I might say it's an impressive piece. Goes in my favourites list. Will catch up on more of your work later.