Monday, May 4, 2009

Its Raining A Beautiful Song Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its raining, i see a rainbow for me, awaits
crystal droplets pour from the heavens gates
the orchids, roses, grass beds are glistering
the blossomed scene, a dancing me, reminiscing
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Angelic(Annie) Female
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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009

Yes, a scrumptiously prepared meal of picturesque spring ingredients of crystals, rainbows, sun rays and ecstasy blended with fragrance, bees and blossoms in serenity a wonderful weave of sweet soft and soothing inagery from Nature. A superbly composed poem that brings out the poet in you. CP

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Catrina Heart 10 May 2009

truly awesome written poem.....Well thought out! ! ! Thanks..........

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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

dreamy, captivating, magical... wow

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Christian Hayes 07 May 2009

i love it, its wonderful you captured the senses very well thoughout

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Marvin Brato 06 May 2009

Brilliant write, it touches the soul!

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what a beautiful song..truly genuine and brilliant!

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Omar Alsadeq 05 May 2009

Very nice with the rain and stuff. Keep up the good work. It awesome

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Sam Stough 05 May 2009

very pretty write indeed. the use of the senses were greatly expressed, keep writing!

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Late Sunrise 04 May 2009

Well written, all your senses seem to enjoy the rain..

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