Its Quiet Here, There Is No One Around Comments

Spot on real good I don’t really understand it all But that’s why I like it. swimming in lasagne sea. That the kind of stuff I write. Its really really good poetry with your character I can understand how you write and how you put words together It fantastic maybe because its poetry but I know you don’t really want to be a poet. I think this I your best lyrical song/poem I no you have thought about this poem and means something to you 10 from me. Keep writing