Sunday, July 13, 2008

Its Okay Babe Comments

Rating: 4.5

Rain thunders down and the warm july day
The girl sits infront of the bus Depot
not sure what to say
She had done so wrong how could they
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Ashley burnam
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Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

You know. If you can write prose or poetry this way. It doesn't matter who wants to claim credit as far as I'm concerned. This girl can write. Period. End of story. 10. GW62

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Marvin Brato 13 July 2008

Family always love us thought we hurt them often... blood is thicker than water! High marks.

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