In deep shadow, your secrets hide.
Behind the smile, there is a turbulence and tide.
Your eyes betray the word you speak.
There is a silent plea and a soul so meek.
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Ruchi, 'vail' should be 'veil', I believe. There is a town/city in our western state of Colorado with the name Vail, a popular skiing destination for some.
If this is from the 'Ruchi' I had contact with several years ago AND if you 'DARE' to have me comment, send me a message! I have some 'suggestions' re your poem. : ) bri
'Vail is a home rule municipality in Eagle County, Colorado, United States. The population of the town was 4,835 in 2020'