Thursday, November 5, 2015

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everytime, looking at every death
i feel myself as the next
i shall be cleaned away
my dears shall cry
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Fatima Obaid
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M Asim Nehal 09 November 2015

Outstanding poem...enjoyed reading it. everything around me will gonna scare me the darkness, the tightness and the lonely me no doors of escape shall be there for me angels with questions shall arise along with the copy of my deeds

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Akhtar Jawad 09 November 2015

Though such thoughts doesn't suit to a girl of your age but no doubt in it that it's a wonderful poem. I suggest you should write poems on hopes of a lovely future life not on death. I wish you a happy, healthy and prosperous life.

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