Wednesday, June 15, 2022

It's My Live To Live Comments

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I sat down to read my book,
I heard a knock at my door.
My heart sank like a stone,
I didn't want to talk anymore.
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Tony Giannotti
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

last line: 'has', not 'as', of course. This poem intrigues me. It makes me wonder what inspired you to write it. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

check spelling of 'Life' in the title. Do you know you can edit your poem after it appears? ;) Welcome to PH.

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Miss Grace 16 June 2022

Wonderful poem.... its true people don't let us live our life our own way...excellent description of the problem faced

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Tony Giannotti 16 June 2022

Thank you very much Miss Grace.

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