Its My Fault Comments

you have to be more creative... don't use the same words the other poet does.... and you know what i mean... improve your grammar... try to separate the sentences by making four-lined paragraphs.. and i know you'll make the same mistake you made.. 'cause it's not the first time you've done it.... i'll give you a five...4 points for expressing your feelings and 1 for trying. you have to keep on writting, trying.. to make it to the 10 points

I just noticed that the word 'hurted' isn't suppose to be like that. its should be 'I've hurt' not hurted. I thought I would just let you know! :) ♥