Friday, February 13, 2009

Its Just So Typical... Comments

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you looked into my eyes and
i stared back into yours
your one of the typical guys
that will only tell me lies.
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John Mccudden 13 February 2009

typical guys well untill she finds the right one. nice write good structure throughout clean poem leads you through it well easy to understand well done on this one its a 10 from me

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Sydne Morris 13 February 2009

awesome rhyme scheme! The pain and sorrow of a broken heart is beautifully portrayed in this poem....bravo: P

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