Thursday, September 10, 2009

Its Just A Kiss... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its just a kiss...
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hazem al jaber
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Lady Grace 26 September 2009

it's just a kiss but it means a lot it's just a hug but it completes me it's just a star, , , but seems he's my sun...thanks for inviting dear

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Angel's lyre 26 September 2009

.............Its just a kiss... .............but not like any kiss... .............Its just a hug... .............but never felt like its warm... I liked this poem very much, true and sincere emotions are expressed.10+++++ be blessed

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 September 2009

this is a lovely piece.

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your emotions are heard in this poem....deep

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 September 2009

A hug, a kiss, and love are manifested emotionally and your poem points this out. Thanks for sharing. Good reading, I give it a 10

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Rehana Nazli 10 September 2009

Its not just a love... it much more and more... its a love created for two hearts... to beat them as one... forever, even more... good elabortion of your perspective of love and lovely feelings.

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Linda Ori 10 September 2009

A kiss is just a kiss.......not so. There are so many different emotions tied to a kiss, and you have described them beautifully, Hazem. As always, a sweet love poem, and a great read. Linda : -)

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Marieta Maglas 10 September 2009

This lyric poem, written very convincingly, has the power to delight the imagination. Lovely to read...............10+++++++++

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Jessie Formosa 10 September 2009

dear Hazem this is a lovely poem, it has sentiment in it, , although there are some grammar mistakes yet the poem in itself shows that you can write lovely poems, i will look over the others as soon as I can Good work

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Luwi Habte 10 September 2009

dear Hazam this is so very nice romantic poem love the way you write thanks for sharing luwi

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Adriana C 10 September 2009

it speaks about your feelings, that's nice...

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Shelly Shelly 10 September 2009

real nice...sweet poem..nicely hugged loved..n kissed..blessed..10

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Jessica Hendrix 10 September 2009

that really isnt inspiraring sorry not good

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