Thursday, June 18, 2009

Its America You Fool Comments

Rating: 5.0

Baby boomers were cool;
Now Ninjas rule.
It’s America you fool.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Matt Mooney 11 August 2009

As Nelson Mandella was the hope of Africa and he delivered now the ball is in Barak Obama's court to end the nightmare of the recent past.Your poem rings true for me. It sums up the present situation in style.

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Subroto Chatterjee 14 July 2009

Ah, so the injured lion can be tickled by a mouse! ! There are good times and bad. Thats life. Remember....the roller-coaster ride...you said it. The days of parables are here once again. Cheers. Subroto

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Deborah Cromer 02 July 2009

I read this one too. You have to be careful when talking about certain things. There are always two forces in politics, and as a poet you need to reach all people. Poetry is one force and claiming one side of a party of 2 forces, may allow you to lose half of your audience. The rest is alright. Good work. DC

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excellent poetyr.. America the great..God be with her........ though she gave up on him

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Christina Phan 25 June 2009

ur right in so different way kept it up 10+ i luv ur work kept writing n do wht ever u luv

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John Lyday 23 June 2009

Artfully told and though it is a satire it is true in many ways. Well done.

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