Friday, April 22, 2005

Its Always About You Comments

Rating: 4.2

I haven’t much of time,
So I’ll say this as honestly as I can in the 2 minuets I have,
I will always be around for you,
Whenever you need me,
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Laura Cummings
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Michael Shepherd 22 April 2005

I agree with PoHo. There's a poem lurking behind this, especially with this apparently contradictory title. I know I shouldn't be snooty about punctuation, Laura, but the thought of Mozart ordering a 'minuet steak' had me giggly. Spellcheck?

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Poetry Hound 22 April 2005

Laura, I like the sentiments you express here but the poem doesn't feel very poetic. Feels rather matter-of-fact, like a note or a journal entry.

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