Monday, June 23, 2008

Its All Your Fault Comments

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The world around me is dark,
And there’s nothing to do,
You stabbed me in the back,
Is that all you can do?
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Emancipation Planz 26 June 2008

Sweet BBH... hee she / he hee..remember that 'your' also contains the word 'our'.... very important here... takes two of you... and in the middle of 'our' is 'u'.... that is sometimes the one to reflect on... forget the bigger parts when it gets tough, ..... see you tomorrow hey... same time xx

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Serenity Prayer 25 June 2008

i believe that no ones emo, theyre misunderstood. im sorry for what happened to you. i truely am. i must say that you are very strong to have held on so far. i must say though, Go Ahead And Cry. let it all out. and im sorry. ill be praying for you. love your poem btw. its sad but its a very beautiful piece.

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Anonymous Thoughts 25 June 2008

this is really sad. you pour your heart out in your poems and i can really feel your pain. life is really hard and people will betray you and hurt you. i know... i got illegally engaged when i was 15, he cheated and broke my heart... i know how it feels to be betrayed. i have suffered from clinical depression since i was young... you need to get some help... pls take heed of this... i really do know how you feel.

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Bootiful Kid 24 June 2008

i didn't just say ok... ily hunni, it'll all be ok! ! i promise!

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Catherine Rica Cosico 23 June 2008

I could feel so much pains in your work...The imagery was good...I enjoyed reading.... Thanks, Cate

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