Thursday, November 29, 2012

Its A Wonderful Moment Of Bliss Comments

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They lay upon the satin sheets

Entwined in each other's bliss
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Kaila George
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Anil Kumar Panda 05 December 2012

full of passion and love it is nice and flows beautiful.liked it.

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Kevin Patrick 30 November 2012

This was an especially sensual read, the words simply radiated with passion, I was completely enchanted in your tale, I think you managed to successfully capture the essence of pure carnal desire of two shared bodies. This was pure...bliss. A great write

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