Tuesday, October 17, 2023

It's A Gray Day Today Comments

Rating: 4.9

It's a gray day today
....a gray and rainy day today
I wonder if it will be
....a gray and rainy day
...
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Susan Williams
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 01 June 2024

Stunning poetry, so pure, a simple yet elegant beauty of words.

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Kim Barney 20 May 2024

This is a marvelous poem, Susan. This is your most recent one, posted about a half year ago. I miss your wonderful words and hope that you are well. Please come back and share your talent with us again.

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Savita Tyagi 10 May 2024

It is so difficult to express the feelings of those gray rainy days when a loved one is departing. One wishes to hold on to but but fails against the formidable foe. The experience is all too real to feel and be touched by your poem..al

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 01 March 2024

A gloomy lamenting poem on a dying person well expressed with the weather. Kudos! !

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M. Asim Nehal 15 January 2024

The only true of this life is Death. We all imagine it in our own ways and you did it fantastically.*********

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M. Asim Nehal 02 February 2024

The only truth....

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Bharati Nayak 09 January 2024

It is a heartfelt poem, a Susan Williams' poem that is full of empathy and vivid expressions !

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Cowboy Ron Williams 09 January 2024

You MUST have written it, Susan. It seems to be completely your style. Five stars for you! Please come back and share something new!

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Smoky Hoss 22 November 2023

This poem touches the depths of the soul. Beautiful.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 October 2023

Heart touching poem, today it is a grey day too at my place, dear Susan.5 Stars Full for this very sad poem. Thank so much for sharing.

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M.J. Lemon 24 October 2023

Amazig verse, Susan. The gray and rainy day resides perhaps in the hearts of those who do manage to keep their own deaths at bay, even for just one more day. This is now one of myfavourites.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 October 2023

a bright blue sky day in Heaven today, such beautiful sentiment! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 October 2023

An ever so sorrowful and heartbreaking poem! .. Quite understandably! .. Loved how you put, but it was

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 October 2023

I pray it will be a gray day that day....a gray and rainy day that day....I like your expression....unique, quite different from others. It's a very commendable piece of poetry.....appreciated!

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 October 2023

Gray days are temporary and death is eternal reality. Very touchy powm

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2023

Maybe SHE wrote it. Let me know, please, if you find a chest full of gold pieces and need help spending them. I like the cadence of the poem, whosever iti is. 4 stars : )

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Kingsley Egbukole 17 October 2023

Well composed and beautiful

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 October 2023

This is a beautiful poem for autumn TFS

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