It's a gray day today
....a gray and rainy day today
I wonder if it will be
....a gray and rainy day
...
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This is a marvelous poem, Susan. This is your most recent one, posted about a half year ago. I miss your wonderful words and hope that you are well. Please come back and share your talent with us again.
It is so difficult to express the feelings of those gray rainy days when a loved one is departing. One wishes to hold on to but but fails against the formidable foe. The experience is all too real to feel and be touched by your poem..al
A gloomy lamenting poem on a dying person well expressed with the weather. Kudos! !
The only true of this life is Death. We all imagine it in our own ways and you did it fantastically.*********
It is a heartfelt poem, a Susan Williams' poem that is full of empathy and vivid expressions !
You MUST have written it, Susan. It seems to be completely your style. Five stars for you! Please come back and share something new!
Heart touching poem, today it is a grey day too at my place, dear Susan.5 Stars Full for this very sad poem. Thank so much for sharing.
Amazig verse, Susan. The gray and rainy day resides perhaps in the hearts of those who do manage to keep their own deaths at bay, even for just one more day. This is now one of myfavourites.
a bright blue sky day in Heaven today, such beautiful sentiment! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
An ever so sorrowful and heartbreaking poem! .. Quite understandably! .. Loved how you put, but it was
I pray it will be a gray day that day....a gray and rainy day that day....I like your expression....unique, quite different from others. It's a very commendable piece of poetry.....appreciated!
Gray days are temporary and death is eternal reality. Very touchy powm
Maybe SHE wrote it. Let me know, please, if you find a chest full of gold pieces and need help spending them. I like the cadence of the poem, whosever iti is. 4 stars : )
Stunning poetry, so pure, a simple yet elegant beauty of words.