(italian Collection) The Thanksgiving Turkey (Final Edit) Comments

Thanks, Rob - I've reviewed this and agreed with you, so I've edited it a bit and may do so a little further later today. I wrote it in a hurry yesterday and posted it too hastily! Thanks for reading and for the advice. - x Jan

This is quite a delightful read...wry, witty and of course funny. Watch the gerunds though...you have too many 'ings' which tend to defuse lines and weaken them Rob