(italian Collection) .... November In Praiano Comments

It has all been said... I'll second Helen. t x

Italy holds such romance for me and you brought this so clearly to life in this poem. Again you've bowled me over. Sublime poetry.... HG: -) xx

The sea - silvered steel! How true. I can see the whole of this scene in my mind's eye. Another delightful read. Thank you, Jan. Love, Fran xxx

Ah, a scenic view with interesting twists. Starts off so hard (steel) and unsettled (fitful sun) . Then sweetens into drifting ripples and a suggestive puckered water. This rises with good contrast with the cliff, sands against, rocky claws and ending with the softened hazy air, asleep but this is not the end, a hint that something else might happen (seemingly asleep) . An artist does not paint a photo but speaks a language. Well done.

Its not a poem but a picture I could see...