Wednesday, September 12, 2012

It Will Soon Be Summer In Australia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tacit, the long spent day
dragged gently searing breath's
vacant lilting pulse, drawn
stumbling aching being,
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Danny Draper
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Loaded with lovely language. Well done my friend!

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Douglas Scotney 16 September 2012

i inhaled............

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Valerie Dohren 13 September 2012

Lucky you - weve had ours, for what it was worth! ! Inspired write

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Ruth Walters 12 September 2012

Beautifully descriptive..................................

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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