Monday, September 21, 2009

It Will Shine Like A Diamond Before Comments

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It will shine like a diamond before
If we can find the rhythm of the life
We can fly once again
Cutting through the lightning
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Louis Rams 24 September 2009

we are not alone, heading for the promised land. that says it all. another ten

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 24 September 2009

yeah, good one. I agree to the comments of other poets here.

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Obinna Eruchie 23 September 2009

This is lyrical, keep it up.

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Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2009

Paint of reality for the dreams

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 September 2009

For a true love, the promised land is not far off.

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Patti Masterman 21 September 2009

Wow, love your language in this. It all flows together so beautifully..(smile)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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