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A good tribute! A nice write! Good luck!

JOHN I LIKE THIS POEM YOU HAVE CAPTURED THE MOMENT WITH BEAUTIFUL WORDS, THAT IS ALL A POET HAS TO DO WELL DONE LIAM

I like your words, John. This is a lovely poem, but I am curious about your punctuation. There are two question marks and no periods. Why punctuate at all, if you are 'anti-punctuation'? If you are going to punctuate, then go ahead and place periods at the ends of your sentences. It is easier to read, I think. Just a thought. Raynette