It Wasn'T Mine Comments

..i give you perfect 10..

..words crafted beautifully..i adored it..

A well written piece.display of great mastery.

Sure Sam.. I'll take your suggestions and try to improve it.. Thanks for the feedback...

Hi Isabella, It is a wonderful piece of work; a touching poem. I like the first half than the second. I think you can rewrite and improve from 'Honey I'd told you never to be drenched by rain........' on words. A spelling correction is needed on second line, change 'feet' to 'feets'. You will be a well known poetess in the future. Best regards, sam