Sunday, April 5, 2009

It Wasn'T Me, Apparently It Was You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

don't say you didn't care..
your eyes told it all
nothing we didn't share
leading to your call
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SarahLouise Malone
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John Lyday 05 April 2009

Bold move breaking character in the last stanza. Took courage and you pulled it off.

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Last hakkaobake 05 April 2009

All I can say is holy s#@t

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