Friday, September 16, 2005

It Was Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ra peeks through
from between venetian blinds
and seeps
into my eyes.
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Genevieve Surrender
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William Jackson 04 February 2006

I really liked this one. Is Ra the sun? If I have understood the poem correctly, the voice in the poem is stating that she likes to awaken to the smell and then the sight of her lover in the bed beside her; only this time, she awakens to find him gone and is left with nothing but to face the empty wall.

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Genevieve Surrender

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