Sunday, December 22, 2013

It Was Time Comments

Rating: 4.8

Simple Mind
Simple Life
Simple Mess
Purely Simple
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Lyn Paul
COMMENTS
Cindy Wright 01 January 2014

Thank you for your comment on my poem earlier. I like yours as well. :)

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Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Profound right....moments in time are ours to enjoy....life is short spend it well!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 December 2013

This minute belongs to us and the time is now..Beautiful..Lyn Paul..

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 December 2013

Once again a Powerful write from your ink. Yes, we cannot goto past. But time at present can be fulfilled with Daisies and Roses. Loved it.

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Marvin Brato 24 December 2013

Beautiful sentiments truly depicts the essence of living!

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Valerie Dohren 23 December 2013

Time is now, in this moment - interesting write, deep and philosophical.

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Hazel Durham 23 December 2013

Simplicity in living embracing the present and the past accepting where you are now. With beautiful lines of the impact of your happiness and fulfilment. Superb and powerful write!

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Paul Brookes 22 December 2013

Yeah I now the feeling really well but I have made really good friends through my pen. | Liked the flow of this poem and its staccato rhythms.10/10 BB : O)

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