It was the night that made me think of
All the missteps, laments smothered feelings
Coming to surface conveying its adversities to God
Bringing up to notice about those obtuse spirits
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A painful night indeed. 'It was the night when my heart ripped open in torment' Full Stars
A fantastic poem! Loved the way you have expressed the feelings of a woman in some insecured ambience... great expression!
Nights are special times to think and reason more clearly. Beautiful poem