Sunday, January 8, 2012

It Was The First Of Fourth Comments

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Peace and quiet, it was the fourth of April..
The phone rang and I sprang..
This news was unbearable..
Tears rolled down as I hit the floor, shattered, beaten and tattered..
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Riley Choma
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Mike Barrett 23 January 2014

Solid imagery in this poem and I liked the positive ending. My mum told all us kids, the instant you survive your birth, death is guaranteed.....it's only a question of time. A true fact, plainly stated. Nice work....you might like to check out a poem or two of mine. Cheers!

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