Saturday, May 18, 2013
It Was The Day Comments
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It was the day when you first kissed
I always desired and honestly missed
It was your breath that made me to think
Was I prepared to swim with you and sink?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
18 May 2013
o touching... Brenda Peterson5 minutes ago great poem of love, feeling, and desire Comment +1 good (yet)
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
18 May 2013
It was the day when you first kissed I always desired and honestly missed
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7/23/2025 10:55:56 AM # 1.0.0
Alexis KrysynaLess than a minute ago confusing at first, read 3 times. grammar, context and rhythm needs a little work. concept appealing and good ideas. Comment +1 caring