Thursday, August 8, 2013

It Was Somewhere Under The Moonlight Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was somewhere under the moonlight,
where I could see those eyes full of rhyme.
Where I could rhythm those lips,
by a flow of love, by tender and a kiss.
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Halsho Zangana
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David Wood 09 August 2013

A very good poem with strong imagery. I like it.

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Payal Parande 08 August 2013

It is something new i read. the words are pinned differently which gives unique rhythm to it. the emotions are well put..overall a well crafted piece...a great job sir

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