Monday, May 7, 2007

It Was Something You Said Comments

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When push came to shove
And I was denied the slighest bit of love,
It was something you said that gave me hope,
As I was like a boxer falling against the ropes.
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Jeff Fleischer
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Rehana Nazli 24 August 2009

It was something you said that gave me hope, As I was like a boxer falling against the ropes. So now, I no longer have to stumble in the dark. I can soar like the lark. Simple beautiful poetry..the use of simily is so apt in the above lines. Rehana Nazli 24/8/09

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