Monday, July 24, 2006

It Was So Simple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Simple dream simple life
Simple happiness simple stride
Looking back at life brings a smile
Not an alteration to compromise
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Kay Barcelon
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Gabe Cruise 03 August 2006

it was so simple, really. it was like a song, a beautiful song. kay, are you a songwriter?

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Gabe Cruise 03 August 2006

kay barcelon, is this a pen name? your poems a very well written, simple sometimes short but it always mesmerizes me. hope to read more from you.

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Kee Thampi 31 July 2006

Funny how one dear could change A simple life in a single dream All he writes well makes it cun and dun in words

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Sydney Daniels 24 July 2006

So easy to be overwhelmed, overcome in the realization of a dream. May many more wishes come true! Great write!

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Kay Barcelon

Kay Barcelon

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