Saturday, September 19, 2020

It Was So Easy To Just Drift Away Comments

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It was so easy to just drift away,
and wander a little further each day.
For as I began to grow much older
love started to grow a little colder.
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Royston Nella
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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 September 2020

Excellent poem. There is no one the loved can refuse to come back after reading this. The repetition of the first and last lines just binds each verse and while you are mesmerised another verse strokes. The rhyming is superb. Great work. I wanna write like this when i grow up

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