She reflects like a newly born widow
waiting to be pried open, dissected, and analyzed,
cause that's all she's worth now, oh well,
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That's so deep and profound... Gee, I'm so envious, why can't I write like that?
This poem is very well written. You can tell that a lot of time and heart went into the writing of it. You have a very mature writing technique.
Da-da-Duh! ! ! ! ! Sad, really invitingly, depressingly, sad where the emotion drips from her fingers as her tears splatter from the rain clouds. Who would expect something so simple could be sooo.......longing, in a creepy way. Let's just hope that none of us end up like that woman. Cheers to a long, happy, fulfilled life. ^.^ Smile! ! !
this one strikes a heartstring, seems so sad for this poor girl.
Really nice poem, I usually like rhyming poems but this was written exceptionally well. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !
This poem is amazing i love it the end just brings it all together!
Wow. It's so depressing! ! It's great! I love being depressed. I mean. Reading depressing stuff.