ears ringing
it's all drowned out anyway
from the hum of my car
as it accelerates,
...
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very simple but well penned, Lee..another great works of yours.. love and hugs, Meggie
Powerfully stunning piece, young lady...You could feel the travestic build-up as it was so very well architected by you...as well as the mellifluous structure that cascaded ssmoothly throughout...Another gem, my friend! ~ ~ ~
Really heartful personally as it happens to everybody when passiong through the eternal stream, beautiful penning with ingenuity, i do appreciate
This poem touched me so much when I first read it. There are different ways to interpret it, and yet, I have the strange feeling that everyone who has read this poem understands it and relates to it as if it were their own experience. Very well written. Be proud of it. -Jade
I've wanted done closure, great line.............nice poem............10
This is so powerful and so sad at the same time Well projected Love duncan X
I admire gifted poets like you who can use words (effortless) to show the intensity of one's emotion when fueled by painful memory. You're certainly my favorite Lee.