the first time I laid my eyes on u,
it seemed that time stood still,
and the Soul of the world surged within me,
when I looked into your dark eyes n realized
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A lovely romantic narrative poem well written in poetic diction, to capture the bliss of mutual love felt in the inner recesses of the lovers hearts. I like the articulation of the piece. Very nice indeed. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
Love is a passion born within the first human heart.... It is the same passion that still rules the world... When it is reflected in the eyes, any one can read that mute language of love.... as you have read it in the eyes of your beloved! Enjoyed this great song of love!
something older than humanity, ancient than deserts and majestic mountains and rivers of the world, Yes love was before anything. A nice write.
Aaaaaah! my dear brother there you have it by the horns. Beautiful poem Siya thanks man, i like it.
Thank you for share dear Siya! I loved your poem, how wonderful it defined love: something older than humanity, ancient than deserts and majestic mountains and rivers of the world,
Lovey poem siyabonga Siyabonga