Thursday, May 8, 2008
It Was Just Too Much Comments
Rating: ★2.5
Together is what she wants
Apart is what they are
Love is what she asks for
So he shows her the door
...
Read full text
Heartbeat Terrorist
COMMENTS
Harley Marie
11 May 2008
Wow! ! ! The Relationship Of Mine That Just Ended LAst Saturday Night Was Like That To Bare Ends Its Really Touching For Me =(
0
0
Reply
Leslie Schroeder
08 May 2008
I can relate fully. This poem speaks everything I feel and know. You deserve medals for this!
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
8/2/2025 12:16:30 AM # 1.0.0
This poem requires some work. It says important things but it says them too many times throughout the poem. Really, the poem is a bit too long.There are too many words repeated needlessly. I gave it a six. GW62