Sunday, May 24, 2009

It Was Just Beyond My Fingers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eternally feeling you on the fleshy patterns on my fingertips,
an epochal sensation stemming millennia - only on human skin.

Not necessarily a physical nebula, but a knowledge in knowing
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Kale Beaudry
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Patti Masterman 15 July 2009

This is great writing. And it all knits together so beautifully. Well done.

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a beautiful writting Kale well doneeeeeeeeeeee 10++++

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Angelic Warrior 24 May 2009

its a good metaphor....lots of oxymoron....nice job: D 10++

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Roshni D'Souza 24 May 2009

So rich with so many images...wonderful write...enjoyed it thoroughly! Thanks, roshni.

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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