Monday, July 6, 2015

It Was I Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lost a piece of me
That I will never
Find again
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Lyn Paul
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Amitava Sur 07 August 2015

A very poignant aspect is being dealt in this poem about those ill fated mothers who lost there babies, there love. My heart bleeds....

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Darlene Walsh 18 July 2015

A loss beyond comprehension for most of us, but your words come very painfully close.

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Smoky Hoss 11 July 2015

Tender, beautiful and poignant.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2015

A great depiction having evocative thought. Enjoyed. Many thanks for sharing. .....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2015

A great depiction having evocative thought. Enjoyed. Thanks.......10

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2015

That one piece! Lost with the muse of life. Nice work.

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Valsa George 07 July 2015

An evocative write.... poignant and stirring! !

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Kelly Kurt 06 July 2015

There can be no greater personal loss. You have eloquently written this. Thanks for sharing, Lyn Peace

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Tony Karas 06 July 2015

Wowwww! An excellent write. It rings inside me for, piece by piece, I lost all of me.

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