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I don't know where I am from
It may be by chance to which I belonged
Struggling enough in womb of my mom
Where my first breath found a friend
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How one changes from birth is specially brought out very beautifully. A magnificent write from so young a person is very impressive. You have got a great poetry world ahead.Thanks for sharing.Very best wishes.
The poem shows your wisdom and enourmous strength, Eindaray. You gracefully describe how we are free of worries in the womb and how everything is magically taken care of before birth. No one has to press a button to switch on our hearts. Then again we do not have to make too much effort to get the full attention and loving care from our parents. A smile and our small soft body does it all. But as we grow up, wicked people are ready to abuse the innocence of children. Somewhere inside, I believe we were meant to be child-like throughout our lives. I wish you lots of strength and hope so very much that you really find back the pluses I think this poem is very deep and shows you have within you what is needed to turn adversities into strengths.Keep the love and caring personality inside your heart but toughen up whenever necessary.
Great. you have progressed a lot. i love this piece of art. it is charming and cool.
brilliant, you have learn so much, the piece is remarkable and keeps the reader stuck to it...and you always make us want more thank you for sharing love payal
Really great job! I appreciate the whole poem especially the first two lines of each stanza.
hi...you keep the beauty of poem in this too really amazing and i really enjoyed the lines The 'Time' stream washes all of my pluses Coz I am getting older with lots of defects gud work »so close«
In your poem childhood's innocence is deeply focused. A beautiful write.
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7/19/2025 1:27:05 AM # 1.0.0
other brilliant piece of work.that's true we all have to learn the way of living from the children.in my thought human being can not reach to the heaven unless they become children again.by the way don't take it so hard of u r self. mucha gracias and cheers.