Wednesday, December 28, 2011

It Was All A Dream Comments

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it was all a dream,
you opened your arms so wide,
to let me in
i could see your angelic eyes,
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Esther Obeng
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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014

Unfulfilled desires play such games in a dream. You have beautifully described it in a poem.

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Patricia Grantham 19 August 2013

Seemed to be a dream of love and passion. To bad it was all in a dream. Maybe it will be continued. Nice write.

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Rajendran Muthiah 09 January 2012

A nice poem to read and enjoy! Wonderful dreamy melody to ring in ears!

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Uche Chidozie 29 December 2011

Nice one, but something is attached to that dream in real life, maybe what ever...

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