It Was A Kiss Comments
It was a kiss, a kiss that sips
Sun stretched its roots to earth from air
The earth's veins boiled, from fire of lips
Like lightning flashes when away flips
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A beautifully passionate write, Riza. Congratulations on this piece being selected.
Lots of passion in this poem that rocks your world! . Congratulations on POD
Superb Poem, Congrats for the POTD honours, Nice picture as well.... I quote: Like lightning flashes when away flips Hummed form toes' nails to the hair.
An imaginative poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.
Kumarmani thank you! You are so overwhelming and generous with my poetry! I hope to read each other even more
Emotionally powerful and full of passion. A kiss that is eternal and brings the feeling of being loved and cared. Amazing! ! Congrats. 'A former kiss, wants other kisses But oh that kiss was dearly precious When longing hurts and winds the fires I come to you thirsty with wishes '... is awesome lines.
Anil thank you! I feel I have to pay more attention to your poems, sorry! riza
The poem talks about the eternal kissing which ignite the forces that creates and sustains life and nature all around us. Thanks & Congrats.
Rajnish yes! in the poem feels the eternal kissing and the forces that the Creator has given us generously... Congrats you
nicely and differently written ////// O' kiss give a life please not in fire, not in grief, not in hunger, no as brief, O' kiss give a life please
Yes is so beautyful very nice... poetry wanders in space and pertains to our minds and hearts from different places... Therefore it is beautiful to live in us, in our interior.. thank you! Riza
Riza, such marvelous poem of the day.. Congrats for being chosen.....
Luljeta I think that kiss is the point of the great explosion that created the world.. Thanks!
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7/29/2025 10:25:55 AM # 1.0.0
A wonderful romantic poem! The two lines which I like most are: " Tell me what happened within the cloud/When fire is kindled with lightening out loud" I vote this lovely poem with a 10
Thank you Dr. Dillip...