Wednesday, February 23, 2011

It Tears My Wings To Shreds Comments

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To say that we should go our separate ways
is not at all in tune with me.
Perhaps I need to tune my heart
my mind
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Luz H.
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2018

Perhaps I need to tune my heart my mind and all that makes me ME! .the thought that you may leave m e......... imagining things and killing you joy of life......... take life as it is..... live in this present moment............. and be happy. you have presented a fine poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 30 April 2018

To think that you may leave some day It tears my wings to shreds! Touching lines of a lovely poem.

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Connie Yost 08 March 2017

Without our wings we cannot fly. This is a very touching poem.

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