Walking through, dying, got blood on the snow now
Melts right through, leaving a cavity of ice chipped
I see a leaf blow by, raped by the wind and
Another one, well I guess it takes two to tango
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This is full of imagery, and it makes people think about the meaning. One of my favorites ^^,
this poem is amazing. it has a lot of meaning to it, i can tell. great job
I love your writing style, full of imagery and it tells a story. Good title, i think your use of juxtaposition really makes this piece all the more rich in quality.
I like the beginning the best and there are some well written phrases that I like near the end.Another well written poem! ! Bravo! ! ! ! !
wow this isi a very powerful poem
i <3 it n idk wut more to say