Thursday, December 31, 2009

It Takes Two To Tango Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking through, dying, got blood on the snow now
Melts right through, leaving a cavity of ice chipped
I see a leaf blow by, raped by the wind and
Another one, well I guess it takes two to tango
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Iron Panda 23™ 08 March 2010

i <3 it n idk wut more to say

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Liz Annson 11 January 2010

This is full of imagery, and it makes people think about the meaning. One of my favorites ^^,

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Tricia Dildine 07 January 2010

this poem is amazing. it has a lot of meaning to it, i can tell. great job

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I love your writing style, full of imagery and it tells a story. Good title, i think your use of juxtaposition really makes this piece all the more rich in quality.

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Viktoria Tepes 02 January 2010

I like the beginning the best and there are some well written phrases that I like near the end.Another well written poem! ! Bravo! ! ! ! !

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wow this isi a very powerful poem

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