when you hear the rain
its my body aching for you
to be that close again in the moonlight
my tears of pleasure is all you
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I love the image breathe me back to life A lovely economy of words. Wow! ! ! You have a gift for hitting it right on the nail Vaneessa.
really? you think so... thank you so much that means a lot coming from a great poet like you..you made my day
my tears of pleasure is all you would ever feel and the freshest air I could ever breathe oh b reath me back to life.......... so fine a description of love, and all that to love belongs. a lovely love poem. thank u dear poetess. tony
Awwww your very welcome