It Started With A Kiss Comments

This is a good poem, but let’s give it the dignity that it deserves. Not that it does not have dignity in itself. You gave it that when you used the word “upon”. You have captured the sensations of the moment. Sensations that every young girl feels at that first kiss. For that reason this poem should go down in history as one of the best. So, let’s correct the grammatical notations. The word ‘that’s’ is a contraction of ‘that is’ so, notice the apostrophe. Next: you know about the space between ‘each others’; but did you know that ‘other’s’ is possessive so another apostrophe. Next: ‘when’ should be capitalized and start a new line. Lastly: I would cut that last line into two, but that is up to you. Now your poem is indeed a great poem and should go in the archives of one of the greatest poems of all time. Adeline

Cute and lovely love poem. 10 for this.

Lovely expressions! .............10