Drop by drop into the silent
Ocean of Time, it trickles down,
Sneaks out in the eye and rolls
Down the cheek, comes out
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Hello Jasmine thank you for your kind comments on my poem. I love this poem it is beautifully written and is a lovely read
a beautiful poem to read. so well written great remembering someone
The last three lines are especially lovely! Enjoyed the poem!
Your remembrance so came into the heart Tear drop changes to dew drop! Beautiful poem. Thank you.
Pain pro memoria nice lovely write with lovely words thank you
From moonbeams to zephyrs to aspen leaves u hav employd my fav wordings and d whole poem turnd out beauteous!
the last 3 lines are just outlandish! marvellous ink there, Jasmine.
Beauty of heart in a beauty of words