Monday, October 7, 2013

It So Came Into The Heart......... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drop by drop into the silent
Ocean of Time, it trickles down,
Sneaks out in the eye and rolls
Down the cheek, comes out
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Yasmin Khan
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Sallam Yassin 18 October 2013

Beauty of heart in a beauty of words

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Noreen Carden 14 October 2013

Hello Jasmine thank you for your kind comments on my poem. I love this poem it is beautifully written and is a lovely read

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2013

a beautiful poem to read. so well written great remembering someone

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Valsa George 12 October 2013

The last three lines are especially lovely! Enjoyed the poem!

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David Wood 12 October 2013

A delightful poem Jasmine, a joy to read.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 October 2013

Your remembrance so came into the heart Tear drop changes to dew drop! Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 October 2013

Pain pro memoria nice lovely write with lovely words thank you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 October 2013

From moonbeams to zephyrs to aspen leaves u hav employd my fav wordings and d whole poem turnd out beauteous!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 08 October 2013

the last 3 lines are just outlandish! marvellous ink there, Jasmine.

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